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Far Beyond the Brilliant Sky - Part 12The atmosphere in the bar changes as the snow-wet bodies step inside. Jackie reveals his face first, wiping away flakes that quickly turn to water in the heat of the place.

His gloves feel sodden; he peels them off, gritting his teeth. They fall with a heavy slap on the floor.

 

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The Wrong WordsA recent post on Facebook made me think about “wrong” words. The post was really a simple test of observation:

 

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Repost when you find the mitsake

 

I shared this on Facebook  and received comments from friends which invariably included a spelling mistake, e.g. “I found it straight away, we must have gone to a good skool” and “I found it in seccunds”.

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Far Beyond the Brilliant Sky - Part 11Angie doesn’t answer Frank at first, but presses her hands, palm-first, down on the bar. Gerry can see her fight to reign her anger in; Frank is drinking whisky he hasn’t paid for, and that isn’t how it goes in Stokeland. Transactions are conducted; maybe not with money, but exchanges occur. A sack of coke for the fire is swapped for a crate of potatoes, a side of caribou for a set of good winter blankets.

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Activities that Make Your Writers Group More EnjoyableSo what does a typical writers’ group look like? I guess it comprises regular meetings and the chance for members to read their current scribblings and then to get a critique from other members.

Certainly that’s how the writers’ group I belong to started, but over time we built some formality into the groups’ workings by

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Far Beyond the Brilliant Sky - Part 10 Gerry wakes up with a start, jerking his head upright so forcefully that he feels the bones in his neck grind together. He groans and reaches round to rub the muscles holding his puny head up, feeling whispery skin. When did I become so old? he thinks, fingers catching on cords of hair, hair that has not been cut for longer than he can remember and winds down his back. I used to laugh at men with hair like this, he thinks, remembering a tramp that wandered the village on Skye before the war, frightening the mothers.

His mouth tastes like curdled milk; an empty stub of whisky sits at his elbow. His eyes feel bruised; a sour burp burns in his throat. Next to him is a woman.

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Far Beyond the Brilliant Sky - Part 9It takes them much longer than they all expect, but the snow comes down relentlessly and plays cruel tricks on their feet; a step forward becomes a step sideways, a lurch ahead becomes a staggering fall. More than once, Hettie is helped to her feet by Jackie. Connor holds Ernest’s hand and tugs him on; the man’s gloves on the boy’s fingers and Connor’s now frozen fingers scream his hatred for Frank, a father who couldn’t make sure his

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Unveil Your Debut FictionIt is about nine years ago now that I started writing short fiction, having finally shaken the dust of a working lifetime in education off my boots and resolved to at last give my supposed creative writing urge a chance to sink or swim. When I looked around for help of various kinds, it occurred to me that many of the people and/or organisations offering it

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Far Beyond the Brilliant Sky - Part 8The snow comes, the snow comes, and when Connor follows Jackie out of their little apartment and down the steps to the world outside, he is struck by how smooth and white and clean the earth looks. The carpenter’s rubbish pile, usually a mass of splintered timber or broken pieces of furniture beyond rescue, has been rounded by millions of tiny white flakes, and is no longer a jagged mash of weapons.

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World Book Day - Celebration of Books and ReadingThere has been much coverage on the TV and radio of World Book Day.

This is something I’m familiar with but don’t really know that much about, so I have been on the World Book Day website to find out a little more. The website quotes, “the main aim of World Book Day in the UK and Ireland is to encourage children to explore the pleasures of books and reading by providing them with the opportunity to have a book of their own.” That alone has to be applauded.

The first thing is the fact that this year’s World Book Day is the 18th year it has been in operation. I thought it was much younger than that.

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Far Beyond the Brilliant Sky - Part 7Jackie comes home.  Connor hears him before seeing him, the man’s heavy feet clumping off snow on the stoop of the carpenter’s workshop.  Their rooms are above where the carpenter conducts his business; sometimes they hear the whirl of the sander or the crack of splintering timber.  They don’t mind the smell of hot wood, pungent as leather, seeping into their home.

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